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  • The joke would be more clear if they’re just talking to themselves without the phone at all. It looks like they could be talking to themselves while the phone has been ringing for a long time or going to voicemail.

    Or you could change the text so it’s more clear they’re talking to someone on the phone and not to themself. Something like “yeah, they didn’t answer” in the first panel.